keddypie ([info]keddypie) wrote,
@ 2008-01-07 11:49:00
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part 2
I'm going to write a brief story for part two, because I don't want to draw the scene. IT HAS NUDITY. LOL. I'll draw part 3. Very little actually happens in part two, and I don't feel like drawing the monotony either.

This is all from a stupid dream I had. I'm not really editing to make it more logical or interesting. I'm using that to justify everything.

     Scene (panel1): Katy lays oh-so-happily in bed, as she often does because she enjoys sleeping so much. The room is dark, as is the outside visible through a split in the curtains. The clock on the headboard reads 1:23. There is a light in the hallway assumed coming from another room in the house. Her slightly disheveled appearance and smile could be suggesting something, but more than likely, she just tosses and turns a lot.

(panel2): A tacky text box at the top of the panel reads "A Few Hours Later." The scene is completely identical to the first, though drawn from a slightly different angle to make clear that the clock still reads 1:23. Katy has tossed and turned a bit, and is now hanging half off the bed and is clearly unconscious.

(panel3): Again, this panel presents a similar image, with another tacky text box reading "A Few More Hours Later." The clock still reads1:23. At this point, Katy can be seen stretching.

(Panel4): Katy, scantily clad, wanders towards the bathroom.

(panel5) : Katy enters the bathroom. Lights are on. Silhouette of showering figure behind shower-type curtain.

(panel6): Katy stands, tired, in a slightly different position as before, staring at the shower. Silhouette is in the same position. Katy looks puzzled, but mostly just tired and agitated. This is half way through the page, and so far, Katy has managed to go from bed, to the bathroom. Very productive as you can see.

(panel7): DRAMATIC CLOSE UP of hand as Katy moves the shower curtain away! Gasp!

(panel8): Yeah, it's just what one would expect. Katy's boyfriend is showering. She doesn't look that startled either.

(panel9:) Panel is identical, including placement of water drops. Katy has raised an eyebrow.

(panel10:) Katy has now turned around. Boyfriend has not moved. She looks intrigued. By this point, you're supposed to have figured out that nothing is moving except her.

(panel11): Katy continues looking puzzled. She states "Well..."

(panel112): "That's peculiar..."


That's it.




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